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On NaNoWriMo and GenAI

I was shocked (but not entirely shocked) during my social media browsing this morning to read NaNoWriMo’s recent statements about the use of AI in writing for the various competitions they sponsor. To say their statement has caused an uproar in the online writing communities I visit would be a severe understatement. This, following the failures on NaNoWriMo’s part to keep children safe from sexual predators is just the cap on a string of unforced errors on the non-profit’s part.

If you’re unfamiliar with NaNoWriMo, the acronym(?) is short for “National Novel Writing Month”. It started off as a yearly voluntary competition to write 50,000 words of a new novel during the month of November. Thousands of people would participate, and those who completed the 50K words before the end of the month would be declared winners, though really there are no losers amongst those willing to give creative writing a try. Over the years, they’ve branched out to sponsor other competitions, with a focus on encouraging younger folk to find enjoyment in writing. NaNoWriMo was not founded to help aspiring writers to become published authors. Instead it was intended to help aspiring writers to develop discipline and to lock the internal editor away for a span of days. I’ve participated many times over it’s nearly 25 years, and have benefited from it greatly.

But last year’s allegations about the Board of NaNoWriMo actively protecting a member who was sexually preying on underaged writers in the forums at the beginning of the competition in 2023 was a serious blow to my appreciation for the organization who had been sponsoring the competitions. I’m not going to rehash the allegations and the actions (and inactions) the board took in response. You can find them documented all over the web. Here is one such recounting.

But the stance the Board has taken regarding Generative AI is just one scandal too many. Today I deleted my 20+ year account there and will no longer be recommending NaNoWriMo to aspiring writers.

It’s bad enough that they are encouraging people to use Generative AI to write their stories, and in theory, submit them for the contest. The contest was always about developing the practice to write nearly 2000 words each and every day of the month of November, and balancing that quota against holiday obligations for the vast majority of American participants (American Thanksgiving occurs near the end of the month). Their statement seems to endorse submitting a writing prompt to a tool like ChatGPT and asking it to write the 50,000 words for the contest in seconds. It belies the entire purpose of the competition.

But then they had to go and label those who oppose Generative AI as “classist” and “ableist”, two hot buzz-words in the social justice movement. And I believe they are using these labels very incorrectly. They seem to imply that neurodivergent and disabled people need these tools to compete with abled and neurotypical people in order to create art. But what I’m hearing from disabled and neurodivergent authors on BlueSky and Facebook is that while they benefit from Assistive AI tools like grammar checkers and spellcheckers, they don’t need Generative AI. And since there have been disabled and neurodivergent people throughout history who have produced wonderful art, I am convinced by their argument. In fact, NaNoWriMo’s position comes across as belittling, as if they are saying that disabled and neurodivergent people cannot be creative without these tools. That in and of itself seems ableist and condescending.

Learning to write and write well, like any art form, takes hard work. It takes practice. NaNoWriMo had a place in helping people take those first hard steps. It encouraged people to write poorly as long as they were writing. Without practice, one cannot hone their craft, and NaNoWriMo was the purest form of practice, writing to a deadline and chucking the inner editor into the closet for a month. They never made any allusion to a promise that at the end of the month, all of the “novels” that were written would be publishable. No, they were very clear that the point of the endeavor was simply to practice writing to a schedule, or failing a schedule, to a deadline. Writing without editing was the whole point.

But something has changed over at NaNoWriMo headquarters. They have seemingly changed their focus from helping aspiring writers to develop a writing practice and now seemingly are focused on making sure every participant has a chance at becoming a successful writer, presumably by being picked up by a publisher or self-publishing. And they seem to feel that Generative AI is one tool that can be used to accomplish this.

But really, the Kindle marketplace (along with all of the other self-publishing sites) are already chock-a-block full of AI-generated garbage, with “authors” trying to make a quick buck. It’s the “TechBros” mantra of making success in writing (or painting/illustration) accessible to the masses, which is encouraging people who can’t be bothered to put in the time practicing to believe they can become instantly successful. Even if Generative AI was not immensely costly in terms of energy and resource depletion, the output is at best mediocre. And it’s also ethically irresponsible because it requires terabytes of training material, much of which is copyrighted and being used without compensation to the authors (or artists). In fact the CEOs of some of the Generative AI companies have testified that they could not make these models possible if they had to fairly compensate the people whose work is being used to train their machines. So, there are many many reasons not to be promoting Generative AI as a part of a creative writing competition, and many reasons why anyone who wants to become an actually successful writer should avoid using them to write their books.

Now full disclosure is warranted here. I do use Generative AI in the development of my stories, both short stories and novels. I use them to help brainstorm ideas, to help me develop my characters and to get feedback on plot ideas. I even use it to get feedback on scenes I’ve written, and the feedback it gives has been valuable (often it reminds me to use more description, to give more insight into the characters’ feelings and not just have them dialog, and to make sure to keep character voice in mind so it doesn’t all read like the same character is taking both sides of a discussion). It’s no different, in my mind, than the feedback that a first pass from members of a critiquing group provides. Oh, and of course I ask it for help with grammar and spelling/word choice. I can never remember when I should use “who’s” and “whose”.

But the words that appear in the manuscript? All mine.

To me, this is an ethical position. You may disagree. I hear the arguments about how Generative AI uses too much power and too many natural resources, and while I have trouble believing some of the estimates of natural resource usage–I have a hard time, knowing what I know about computing devices and the needs of data centers, believing that a simple query drains an entire pond and consumes it somehow–I know that in the long run the current computational cost is unsustainable. Knowing Moore’s law, I do believe those costs will come down quickly, but that’s only my opinion. The resource arguments, though, are definitely worth considering and paying attention to, I agree.

Anyway, I’m saddened that NaNoWriMo has made this decision to endorse using Generative AI in their competitions. I’ve enjoyed participating in the contests, have several “Winner” t-shirts in my closet, and several posters. I’ve donated to the foundation that powers it and powers the charitable work they do fostering writing in schools and such. But I now feel betrayed by the current board members. I know I was not the only person to delete my account from their servers today, and I know I’m not the only person pledging to donate to other causes in the future. I doubt I’d go back if they changed this stance, too much damage has been done (did I mention the child sexual predation they allegedly spent six months desperately trying to cover up?).

RIP NaNoWriMo.

15 Days ‘till NaNoWriMo 2023

I’m back to working on my preparations after taking Sunday off. There are several significant gaps in my plot that are bothering me. I hope that by focusing on the setting and characters, I can gain clarity on what needs to happen in the middle of the story, which is currently a bit murky. During today’s brainstorming session of 3,000 words, I did manage to identify some story elements I need to include, like a rooftop chase through the twisted streets of my city’s slums. So, with a bit of luck, a few more days of this work will provide me with exciting content to fill in the gaps in my plot.

I’ve also realized that I’ll need to add an average of nearly 3,000 words to my manuscript each day throughout November. If I had the same amount of time to write every day during the month, I would say it’s no problem. However, I will be traveling for a week in November, and I don’t expect to write my 3,000 words on those days. Therefore, I’ll have to set higher expectations early in the month to hopefully get ahead of my target, compensating for the days when I’ll have a lower word count. I’m not particularly worried about it, but I do need to be mindful of this challenge.

NaNoWriMo 2023 Prep Continues

My preparations for NaNoWriMo 2023 are well underway. After some contemplation, I’ve decided to embark on the journey of writing the Steam and Sorcery story. This marks the beginning of character development, the sketching of the plot, and the enrichment of somewhat scant setting descriptions. I’m also exploring tropes and cliches to incorporate additional layers of flavor into the narrative.

As I’ve previously mentioned, these ideas have been nurtured by the world-building I’ve been engaged in for some tabletop role-playing games I’m developing. The fantasy concept took the lead in my decision-making process, piquing my creative curiosity.

Brainstorming can be a delightful process, but it’s not without its challenges. Sometimes, ideas don’t neatly align, and I’m left grappling with the task of harmonizing the elements. At this point, I’ve managed to outline approximately 20% of the intended 40 scenes, with a primary focus on the beginning and end of the story. Now, the task at hand is to unravel the intricacies of the middle section. Sounds like a walk in the park, right?

NaNoWriMo Prep 2023

As I kick off the preparations for NaNoWriMo 2023, my mind is currently wrestling with two intriguing story ideas. I haven’t yet made a final decision on which one to pursue, as both hold my interest. I’ll likely spend some time pondering each of them and let the one that resonates with me more take the lead.

Fantasy (Steam and Sorcery):
Set in the city of Dænavar, tensions are reaching a boiling point. Separatists are agitating for the removal of the Imperial Governor, the Mage’s Guild is vying for a seat on the city’s ruling council, facing opposition from the Artificer’s Guild. Meanwhile, the unexpected death of the city’s top crime boss has plunged rival gangs into near-open warfare on the streets. A young woman from the elite Emperor’s Guard, known as the “Greencloaks,” has been tasked with delivering a parcel of great importance to the Governor. However, her mission is derailed, and the package is stolen. Can she navigate the complexities and perils of a city on the brink of revolution and recover the stolen package in time?

Sci-Fi (Space Opera):
The Empire has demanded the annexation of an independent world with whom they’ve long maintained peaceful and profitable relations. Without explanation, Imperial forces are amassing in the system, poised to take the planet by force if it doesn’t voluntarily yield to the Emperor’s demands. During this tumultuous time, an aide to a senator in the independent world’s government does everything possible to prevent an impending war. When negotiations collapse, he joins her on a desperate mission to seek assistance from neighboring systems. Their journey is aided by a confident and skilled free trader, piloting one of the sector’s fastest ships. As they endeavor to breach the blockade, they are relentlessly pursued by enigmatic and lethal adversaries determined to thwart their mission. Can they secure the help they need before their home planet is lost? Who are these pursuers, and do they have a role in the Imperial threat?

Both of these stories captivate my imagination. They sprang from the world-building I’ve been engaged in for tabletop role-playing games I’m developing. I’ve been working on the sci-fi concept for a few days, but the fantasy idea emerged just as I was about to begin outlining the former. I have three weeks to decide which story to tackle for NaNoWriMo, unless, of course, another compelling idea comes to mind before then.

Long Time No Blog

It’s hard to believe that nearly two months have passed since my last blog update.

Double-checks

Yes, indeed, it has!

To be honest, not much has unfolded on my end. I find myself dissatisfied with my current writing progress, my goals, and various aspects of my writing journey. Consequently, I’ve decided to take some time off to reflect on the changes I might want to implement.

Short Stories: My endeavor to master the art of writing short stories hasn’t seen significant advancement. I’ve dedicated considerable effort to this pursuit, but there’s a disconnect in how I approach my creativity that doesn’t quite align with the constraints of short narratives. Perhaps it’s time to set this task aside temporarily until I’ve established more sustainable writing practices.

Novels: With NaNoWriMo just around the corner, I’m contemplating a shift back to novel writing for a little while. It’s a realm where I feel more proficient, knowing I can steadily make progress and engage my mind more effectively. In preparation, I’ve been immersing myself in several books on writing advice. While I’ve gleaned valuable insights from these resources, the sheer volume of conflicting advice often amuses me. I intend to delve deeper into this subject in upcoming posts.

NaNoWriMo: I’ve discovered that I thrive with some level of accountability and a sense of urgency when it comes to my writing. It might be a manifestation of undiagnosed ADHD, but the prospect of meeting daily word count goals, coupled with the awareness of the pains of falling behind, compels me to sit down and write. Therefore, I’ve committed to participating in NaNoWriMo once again this year. Historically, I’ve had a reasonably successful track record with this challenge, having “won” it about 67% of the time I’ve attempted it, even while juggling a full-time job. Now that writing has become my primary focus, I’m eager to witness my daily word count. I’m sticking with the 50,000-word target for now, but if I consistently exceed 2,000 words per day, I might consider raising the bar. Regardless, I am wholeheartedly determined to complete a novel during this year’s challenge, no matter how many words it ultimately entails.

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